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Post by Crisis on Oct 10, 2007 9:28:24 GMT -7
You can make your comments and feedback on my character story here. This is a temporary thread I'll delete in the future.
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misty
Sorcerer's Minion
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Post by misty on Nov 4, 2007 20:10:16 GMT -7
wow!!!! excellent style.......... i love it. waiting for more to read.
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Post by Crisis on Nov 4, 2007 20:52:59 GMT -7
Ty m'dear. That means alot coming from you. Welcome to the KE.
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Post by Insidius on Nov 5, 2007 19:39:41 GMT -7
Yeah Cri,
I am enjoying the story. Very nice!
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Post by RAIVEN on Nov 5, 2007 19:47:19 GMT -7
And we all agree. It's too dam short!! Stop teasing us. Grrr... #sign0173#
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Post by Crisis on Nov 5, 2007 20:05:13 GMT -7
Lol. Okay okay. You guys win...
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Post by Crisis on Nov 8, 2007 8:00:38 GMT -7
Thanks Barn. I setup this section you can post in. Lol being as my Playstation Portable and other gadgets I use, only allow so many characters per post I had to come up with a writing style that worked for both the reader and I. So I went with short and suspenseful rather than long and eventful. I'm glad its working! Some of the best stuff happens when I met Abel and the CoL so there is plenty more to come.
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Post by Crisis on Nov 8, 2007 8:02:55 GMT -7
Wait I should not have said that.. Lol.
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Post by BarnCatDrgN on Nov 8, 2007 8:38:34 GMT -7
Don't worry. I read that with my eyes closed, didn't see a thing. And there's nothin wrong with the Green Mile short style lol. "Yessir my name is John Coffee, spelled like the drink cept I'm 7 foot tall and barf gnats after healing your urinary tract infection and reviving dead circus mice." {Can't claim credit for that weirdness, fellow dark weirdo Stephen King's brainchild there.} Right on and write on.
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Post by RAIVEN on Nov 11, 2007 17:35:41 GMT -7
Oh oh! What happens next?? Grrr...I hate the suspense...
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Post by RAIVEN on Nov 20, 2007 1:19:11 GMT -7
Ack another cliffhanger!! This is worse than the perils of Paulina!!!
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Post by Crisis on Nov 20, 2007 2:55:06 GMT -7
Lol. Its funny because as I was reading the story I also got drawn in at the suspense of my own writing. And I found myself wondering "what happens next"!? I'm digging how this style is working out. I'll add a few more episodes for Raiven's delight.
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Post by BarnCatDrgN on Nov 20, 2007 9:42:38 GMT -7
Da dada daaaH! But wait Rosa's Pregnant! with Da dada daaaH! Ferdinand's Child who's Da dada daaaH! twoheaded! and aDa dada daaaH! Vampiric Cabbage Hybrid bent on Da dada daaaH! World Domination but wait Da dada daaaH! Our Hero Captain Papyrus from the Da dada daaaH! Ancient Egyptian Future and his Da dada daaaH! army of edible mummies are coming and Da dada daaaH! Suspense time.
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Post by gladriel on Jan 3, 2008 11:02:32 GMT -7
Must... Hear... More...! (in the voice of William Shatner)
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Post by Crisis on Jan 3, 2008 17:59:39 GMT -7
Haven't worked on the story in quite a bit but planning to start a few more installments real soon! There will be points in the story where my character leaves shade several times which may seem a bit confusing. There are some clues but also some errors in the story that hints the time each fragment takes place. I guess it was interesting when I had it in my mind but now that its on paper I will need to correct a few things. More to come!
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Post by docdeath on Mar 12, 2008 23:15:45 GMT -7
well when do we get more? lol very nice brotha crisis
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